Through the Hourglass
-- Sometimes the best memories are those that do not exist-----Snowdrops are falling. l Imagine love opens this way,quietly, fragile.Like a handful of peoniesand a boy, pink cheeked, his voice turning...
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L---sensitivity. and now the details. Sometimes the best memories are those that do not exist a quote? or what? is it connected to the poem? ----- Snowdrops are falling. not a heart stopping open.l...
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Lisa, you have many great moments in your poem, dealing with a subject I always have difficulty writing about. In the opening I would drop like. l Imagine love opens this way, quietly, fragile, a...
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Lisa,I'd liketo read a tad more verbs. The carving of the guitar madeno sense to me. This is probablyone of those images/thoughtsthe reader knows full well butthe reader doesn't get from the...
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